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.The UnderDog Has My Heart. by ~educated-corpse:iconeducated-corpse:



Lips moving a million miles
Expressing death, no smiles
Tongue running wild

Letters play on my eardrums
The ones I thought were numb
Where'd these words come from?

Iris' bleed with confusion
Why do these people abuse my friend
His minds cluttered, but it's the only one I choose to reside in

I can't stress enough
This false sense of love
The lie told too much

Experience the dream
Double dosage amphetamines
Scratching at dry eyes, veins, he's a fiend

He's my fiend, I picture with precision
Caught breathless as he spoke of his vision
I want his mind to be my prison

Claw at clay walls
Filthy bathroom stalls
Imprint my nakedness on them all

Remember me forever
Too friendly for a lover
Still closer than your transvestite brother

I'd bathe in your knowledge
Where ever hidden, tears, pain and vomit
Your pain, my pleasure, my profit

Continue speaking as my favorite lyricist
Perfect perception with a twist
The reason these words exist

Mixed meanings written on rice paper
Prize hidden in the depths of a new born's diaper
With a stench that strikes faster than that of a viper

Set these words on fire
They mean nothing, I'm a liar
A fake, Never a pretty crier

Untie this ball of yarn for brains
Reveal the secret I kept enslaved
I lie continually to be your puppet with no name

But you must remove your fist
I'll fend for myself, try to exist
Leave, grant me this one last wish

I'm leaving my mess
Glass veins and paper flesh
No brains yet still depressed

I just want one kiss, it's all I ask for
This false hope, broken promise, nothing more
Now leave me faster than all the others did before

Don't leave a trail, I won't follow
Can't see, my eyes are broken glass bubbles, hollow
I lied. I eat your breadcrumb path, dry mouth, it's so hard to swallow

I'm choking, coughing up sawdust
Moist with memories, the color of rust
This pain's a must

Empty stomach, hunger pains
Get on my knees, eat again
Turn your back on this grotesque beast, this is the end.
©2007-2009 ~educated-corpse
:iconeducated-corpse:

Author's Comments

This is for a friend.
Under Dog
Same guy I wrote Reborn Affection for.
Yep.

Hope you enjoy.
It's supposed to be read like a rap... sort of.

:blowkiss:

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:iconwastelandsofthemind:
Haven't read anything from you for awhile, and it looks like you haven't slipped at all. Good as ever!

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:icondbl-a:
nice word play and vocabulary!

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Be my friend and I'll be yours right back!!! :glomp:
Please visit my gallery :deviation:
:iconeducated-corpse:
:blushes: Thank you very much.

:hug:

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These headphones keep me sane.
:icondbl-a:
np problemo! :)

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Be my friend and I'll be yours right back!!! :glomp:
Please visit my gallery :deviation:
:iconlordbeazy:
It's long, and I caught the rappy theme, but you hang on to the end without repetition and it holds the attention. Lotsa work and a solid kick-ass piece! :)

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconfluer-x:
I had a good time rapping to this :D Quite embarassing though, my brother heard me ¬_¬ hehe
:iconlabbes:
Well, I surely wont rap to this but the melody still rings in my head :)
Great!

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:iconblackheartedgoddess:
LONG!!! and nice words:)

like the new way or writing! you go girl!

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From whence you came you shall remain,
until you are complete again
:iconeducated-corpse:
:blushes: Thank you. And I saw that you watched :iconfabulae: !!! :excited:
She will not disappoint.

:blowkiss:

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These headphones keep me sane.

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