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Comfort comes in a different form. A new fear.
Frantic rodents scratching at your skull, close to your eyes, too near.
Your skin like paper, too close to a flame.
Life force out poured to drown the threat yet again.
Illiterate baby, so I babble meaningless sounds.
Rubber limbs tangled, Sun up, I'm melted to the ground.
With a forceful snap I'm free to roam.
Saw dust for brains, I forget which way is home.
Recycled air.
Feed on the forms that aren't there.
Fear begins to take shape.
Reality swallowed whole, the Earth breaks.
Falling like Alice, down a bottomless rabbit hole.
Scream out but the only response is my faint call.
Strong metallic taste tickles the tastebuds in the hole in my face.
And I begin to fall at a slower pace.
My head meets the pavement, rough concrete kisses.
My body's a bean bag in need of new stitches.
I see stars and then clouds of black fog my vision.
Unconsciousness becomes my new prison.
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I really enjoy this one.
I'm proud of myself. :blushes:

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:iconlordbeazy:
A new line of thought brings out a new line of poem. Its original and off-beat. :)

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconeducated-corpse:
:giggle: Thank you very much for looking at it Rob... :licking:

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These headphones keep me sane.
:iconlordbeazy:
My pleasure, Miss. :rose:

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconfabulae:
This is absolutely fantastic!
:iconfabulae:
Especially the opening line... Comfort comes in a different form. A new fear.... what a concept! I :heart: this.
:iconeducated-corpse:
:blushes: Thank you so much.

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These headphones keep me sane.
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Great rhymes, its wonderful :)

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See my one and only real deviation: [link]
:iconeducated-corpse:
Thank you so much! :blowkiss:

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These headphones keep me sane.
:iconrazel-photography:
Wow, that's pretty cool ^_^

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My eyes see beauty, my mind sees truth
You see the beauty I see, you read the truth I see.

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